I thought the camera work was pretty good. Even though it was a dark video, it wasn't too grainy or anything. And parts where it was grainy (whether that was because of the camera or on the editing side) worked well. I wish when she was dragging the brother it would've had more jump cuts. I think it needed to be faster, and I don't think we needed to see the whole drag. It would have made it more believable I think.
Had some moments of really great editing, the slow motion of the girl falling at the end, the way the music was cut with the important moments. Good job!
The music really helped the video. The acting from the brother was great. The makeup effects were done very well. I really liked the final shots of the two laying dead on the ground. Solid editing.
honestly, you had me until i saw the texture on the sheet, i would have left that part out. We could have gotten it from just seeing it in the corner. I honestly, really enjoyed this, it was fairly scary, i just wish that the cheesy parts were kinda left out, like some of the stairs. Other than that, WHAT?!? WHAT?!!?
it was pretty good! I think there could have been some creative cuts to shorten the film and still get the desired feeling. The part where the daughter sees the demon was pretty scary. The background music was a little too loud. overall the film was pretty good
Bonus points for legitimate creepy smile after the possession. Weird but fitting music. I can agree the dragging scene was a little longer than necessary.
There was a lot of potential here. The makeup effects were great. To me it seemed that you relied to heavily on audio to create the feeling of suspense but it became to overpowering and did the opposite effect. The scene were the brother was being dragged away was suppose to be this intense scene but it came off more funny then scary. The lighting changes were sort of off in some scenes.
this turned out awesome! Great job, the FX makeup was on point, amazing acting, the music went well, and it was very believable.
ReplyDeleteNice job with the editing it turned out really good. All the sound effects worked really well too. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThis was legitimately creepy, great job all around.
ReplyDeleteThis was really cool. I loved the music
ReplyDeleteI thought the camera work was pretty good. Even though it was a dark video, it wasn't too grainy or anything. And parts where it was grainy (whether that was because of the camera or on the editing side) worked well. I wish when she was dragging the brother it would've had more jump cuts. I think it needed to be faster, and I don't think we needed to see the whole drag. It would have made it more believable I think.
ReplyDeleteHad some moments of really great editing, the slow motion of the girl falling at the end, the way the music was cut with the important moments. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThe music really helped the video. The acting from the brother was great. The makeup effects were done very well. I really liked the final shots of the two laying dead on the ground. Solid editing.
ReplyDeletehonestly, you had me until i saw the texture on the sheet, i would have left that part out. We could have gotten it from just seeing it in the corner. I honestly, really enjoyed this, it was fairly scary, i just wish that the cheesy parts were kinda left out, like some of the stairs. Other than that, WHAT?!? WHAT?!!?
ReplyDeleteit was pretty good! I think there could have been some creative cuts to shorten the film and still get the desired feeling. The part where the daughter sees the demon was pretty scary. The background music was a little too loud. overall the film was pretty good
ReplyDeleteBonus points for legitimate creepy smile after the possession. Weird but fitting music. I can agree the dragging scene was a little longer than necessary.
ReplyDeleteThere was a lot of potential here. The makeup effects were great. To me it seemed that you relied to heavily on audio to create the feeling of suspense but it became to overpowering and did the opposite effect. The scene were the brother was being dragged away was suppose to be this intense scene but it came off more funny then scary. The lighting changes were sort of off in some scenes.
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